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by melvinsharples

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OdiouserOdiouserover 2 years ago

We always need new writers, so welcome to the fold.

Just one criticism, intended to be constructive:

this was a very laborious read due to way oversized paragraph lengths. Your entire short story ran to a total of NINE paragraphs. Needs to be 4 or 5 times that number. Keep 'em coming,

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