All Comments on 'Eddie the Hero'

I really liked this tale. You are truely very talented writer. Looking forward to read some more stories from you. Thanks for the wonderful story.

I always stop the search when I see your name. Thanks for a fine humorous tale. The good guys win with a humble smile. You could have dragged out the story for a page or two more, but for me it was just right. Please keep writing. Thanks

The back and forth between the couple is good.

Making it longer would be good and perhaps Eddie could be a bit less blunt.

Overall a decent story.

an interesting story to say the least....and out of it they found love...can't be bad....

I will not rate it because as a romance story (you do know you posted it in the Romance section right?) it is fairly crap, barely worth a 1 star.

If you post it off in Mature or Erotic Coupling then it is a 4 or 5 star story.

This lost me at the line about remembering she had big tits when accepting her asking for a date

"Well that sets my expectations Dottie. All I really require is for you to open your legs and help push it in. If you manage to bounce back at me, so much the better"

After this one I stopped. Just pathetic... who fucking talks like that, and what woman would go for that? Maybe I'm wrong but this doesn't feel romantic. Feels like the start of an abusive relationship at best.. but really just sound like a 13 year old who is dreaming of being a macho sexy stud bad boy that gets any girl he wants.