Edge Pt. 02

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Kara nodded, saying, "It's just a blowjob. These ones are super easy, especially if you go after a guy. Since it's not gender specific, you could do a girl, too, but guys are an easy target. What guy doesn't want his dick sucked by a hot girl like you? Consider the rewards, too. That's a good one. Money, two days of freedom, and a rank up. This is a no-brainer, Jenna."

"What's Cum Bucket designation?" Jenna asked, looking at the result of failure.

"You become a free use cum hole for any other player, regardless of rank, for 24 hours. You also get a target painted on you, signaling your location to everyone. Anyone that wants to can cum in your mouth during that period."

"What the fuck!" Jenna cried.

"Them's the brakes, kiddo."

Jenna cringed. What was the alternative, though? Stay a Rank Zero? Be a low-level toy for anyone of higher rank? Refuse to play and see her entire family become a missing person report?

"I... I don't know how to do it." Jenna admitted.

"No better way to learn," Kara said, "than by giving it a try. It's not rocket science. Place cock in mouth. Wrap lips around cock. Lick, suck, bob your head, swallow. Or take it in the face. Or the tits. Or wherever else. Most guys aren't really particular."

"So, I just find some stranger on the street and ask if he wants a blowjob? He's going to think I'm a hooker, or something," Jenna said.

"Well, I can propose an easy solution for you, if you're open to it," Kara said, a grin spreading across her face.

"This ought to be good."

"It is! It has to be someone previously unknown to you, and I do have an older brother," Kara suggested.

Jenna sighed, and asked, "You're serious?"

Kara nodded and said, "Sure. I'll just tell him that I have a friend who lost a bet and has to do something kinky, and he'll be glad to get his dick sucked. Then, I get to be a good little sister, too. Win-win."

Jenna considered it. It was a better option than going around and asking strange men, who were complete unknowns, if she could suck their dicks.

"Okay," she said, resigned, "When?"

"I need to meet with my keyholder, so I'll message you afterward. We'll do it tonight."

Jenna nodded and said, "Alright."

Dressed, the two girls made their way downstairs, where Jenna made a brief introduction of her new bestie to her parents. Kara departed, and Jenna sat through dinner at the table, morose and flushed, the belt teasing her. She was starving, though, and ate everything before heading back upstairs.

Now that she had a moment when there was not adrenaline or terror coursing through her, and her arousal was fairly low in comparison to the norm, Jenna had some time to breathe. Sipping from a bottle of Obsequium, she opened the Edge page and began to explore more of it. Outside of the challenge screen, she found other features, including her trust score in her user profile. The ability to edit the profile was currently locked and a message stating, "Obtain rank 10 to unlock customization," hovered over the grayed-out fields. Her trust score stood at 100% with two reviews.

Curious, she tapped at it. The page displayed a star rating, both reviews showing five stars. The first was from Kara, whose picture she recognized, as well as her player number. The score showed two rated interactions, both the same rating. The second player's rating showed a profile picture of the hunter, who she saw was a Rank eighteen Hunter class going by the player name StimShot. Apparently, forcing her to a humiliating public orgasm had made him happy.

She clicked on Kara's photo, which opened her keyholder's profile. Jenna found Kara's own trust score, a stellar 99.7% with thirty-six rated interactions from both low and high-level players. It also included three ratings of five stars each from someone named SysAdmin, whose profile photo was the all-seeing eye. That made Jenna shudder. In reciprocation, she left Kara two five-star ratings. It was the least she felt she could do.

She flicked the profiles away and spent the rest of her time perusing the very detailed rulebook, while she waited for Kara.

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

First half of Part 1 was almost supernatural. It felt like an omnipotent force of nature decided to pick a victim and fuck with them. Finding out it was some kind of sci-fi thing which people were using to fuck with each other was a bit of a let down, but it was still good. This development was disappointing though. Sending young women out to seduce congressmen is so mundane. And the whole "alternate society" part sounds like a two-bit cult leader from the 70s. It makes the whole thing feel much less powerful. And once you expose a weakness, people will probe you for more weaknesses. After this chapter, I can't help but wonder what happens if someone decides to fight the system. Maybe they pick the wrong target, and at some point, the victim commits suicide, or better yet, goes on a killing spree while leaving the details of their ordeal as a manifesto. These thoughts briefly crossed my mind in the first half, but they were quickly dismissed. Now they're harder to ignore. Because such actions would be useless against an omnipotent malevolent god, but they'd have an actual effect on "some dude" pulling the strings.

I'm just going to skip to the end to see how it plays out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing story. Love the details. Can't wait for the next chapters.

Ellie_RHEllie_RHover 1 year ago

I can't be the only one who wants to see her fail this challenge?

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