All Comments on 'Edge Pt. 10'

A great conclusion to a wonderfully imaginative story.

Wow Hamlin, this was great. Looking forward to the finished book. Who knows, could be a good HBO series.

I love the way you’re bringing it all together—really good story-craft.

First half of part 1 was award-winningly incredible. Then it went downhill fast and descended into the usual porn-logic level of plot and storytelling. It's not bad. It's just... mediocre. Serviceable as jerk-off material, but the world feels more like a porn set for people to fuck on, rather than an actual, fleshed-out world populated by real people.

great story