All Comments on 'Edit Me Harder!'

Yet another story that is truly enjoyable. Thanks!

... but now I've developed an unhealthy fear of editors.

On a more (or less) serious note, the method of mind control is nicely subtle and keeping the exact means hidden until late in the story was fun.

...but very good. Very funny and extremely clever. Definitely one of the funniest I've read on Literotica so far!

I didn't quite understand how the mind control worked. That part was a little obfuscated. What is the SBL board? A brief note would help. Otherwise, well done!

She logged into his website to privately give him a piece of her mind

...split infinitive...

She was an attractive woman, she knew, she'd just been too busy to take advantage of it properly. Or for them to take advantage of her, properly. She grinned at this thought and began to take care of herself properly

...properly, properly, properly...

being naked in school, and having all the other kids staring

She was having a hard time getting the chat out of her head, though, and sleep would not come

Pearl she may or may not be, but she certainly had one, and she diddled it

I was going to post my edits here, but

...etc. etc.

unnecessary commas...

It was a crappy story, in other words

...rephrase – In other words it was a crappy story...

It was juvenile, really.

...emphasis or observation?...

but despite the way he disgraced her in it

...he criticises her and then she feels disgraced...

She quickly informed the moderator that a censorship solution was not necessary. That probably she had over-reacted. But the response back indicated it had been Theodoric's idea to editing her.

...rephrase as one sentence...

so I am reverting back to that one

...‘back’ is tautologous here...

Provocative, sexy, and gut-bustingly funny! Thank you!

Not even disappointed I couldn't love it while reading cause I was too busy fucking loving it.

So funny, a totally geeky satire that had me laughing at myself as well.

One more edit and it will be perfect.

H

Bruh. I can relate to Ted on a spiritual level.