All Comments on 'Ed's Sister Gives Him a Lap Dance'

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ddealddealover 2 years ago

MC was kind of a dick

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Don't like whores to begin with, especially when it's the dude's sister. Gross.

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

Describe the sister, a physical description. How much is this startup going to cost, and if it fails, does that end the sex? Will the wife become suspicious?

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

I would love to hear more tails.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Much better than average. Very good premise, handled very well.

5* —ignore the haters.

Tc

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 1 year ago

Didn't like the Bitch making fun of Charlie in the beginning. I would have ditched her. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

All I could think of while reading is why is the sister of such a rich tech bro working as a stripper. Did Bill Gates sister ride the pole?

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Well educated and interested in lots of things. All my stories are 100% fiction. They are the result of a dirty mind and a vivid imagination.