All Comments on 'Educating Laura Ch. 04'

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coolpencoolpenabout 1 year ago

You handle dialogue so well - the accents and colloquialisms - almost as if this is drawn from personal experience.

The pace is good and the occasional reticence of the characters adds to the realism.

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