by Myrmidon69
I would have liked to know about the first week in which Misstres Erica teaches Mary to obey, each of the days, each of the detailsn This woul have nedeed more chapters and, of course, I wouldn't complained. It is supoused many things are coming. Good, good, good. I'm here, waiting
I totally enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next chapter!! Great work keep it up.
I hope it's only a delay. Do not leave this half, unfinished, some evil for your readers.
So alien to the self defined normallicy.
While I doubt I ever wanted to be any part of this, even as the dominant subject (that's lot more work than you might think), there is that obvious magic in it. As a dream, as a distant fantasy, as a possibility that can't come true, it is so extremely alluring and so exciting, and yes, beautiful on its own independent scale of measure. Thanks!
liked it a lot, kind of wish Lawrence wasn't gay but had learned to like women. I'd have been a bit more comfortable with him being bi with a preference to men but it's whatever. hope you add another chapter with Mary being picked up by her husband or her husband coming in and being trained. Erica is cool too
Only for the real brain sick perverts who need psycholigic help or a place at a nut house!!!