by TenEyes
Great story, one that all teen to middle aged men need to read and learn.
Go Lobos?
I gave it 4 stars.
I'd have liked it better if there was some slow undressing of her. Slow, step-by-step seeing and then touching of her body. He got undressed too fast, and that just wasn't erotic. She could have teased him a bit as she got naked and talked about what she was going to do to/with him, and what he was going to get to do with her.
She stuck her finger in his ass -- and then it went nowhere. She didn't get him to do anything much to her -- including at least fingering her ass.
Perhaps you're saving him going down on her and some any play for a sequel.
I'll read it.
Yeah. I kind of fell in love with Kim. I'm an ESL teacher and I've known so many Asian women who were kind and intelligent and fun to be with, but I never had an experience with one like the Kim in this story. Close...once or twice. 5 stars.
Hope to see more from you.
Nicely paced,and really liked her
I had an older lover in college, divorced, it was good for both us....