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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Phrasing Phunny

"David released one of her thighs and moved it to her shoulder…"

So Beth is a contortionist whose hip can rotate nearly 180°?

(I guess you meant David's hand moved.)

Diverting short read, otherwise. 😁

SilkBlackSinSilkBlackSinover 7 years agoAuthor
Whoops!

Ha! I guess she is! I feel silly for missing that when looking it over before submitting. I hope you were able to enjoy, regardless!

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