All Comments on 'Eirin Ch. 06'

Love, love, love this story. Legit made me tear up quite a few times. Love.it!

Thank you for completing the story, and most importantly, for delivering such an amazing story of love with a sophisticated use of language.

This..... Was so beautifully written.... I teared up.... The last chapter was so vivid and sweet.. I wish there was a little extra to them just travelling the town and her bonding with Maria. Maria's character was a perfect tie and mediator between the two and she was definitely necessary. i wish there was a little more that he could have done for her like... A little extra like the chess. Like say they share another specific hobby that tied in with thier past and love... Almost like if they just cuddles and read together but anyways. That's just me craving more sweetness to a story that's somehow also about non_consent. It was just perfect! Another read that I recommend for just inspiration is "taking of Lena" or Lana.... Sadly they never wrote a good ending like yours but throughout she had the same heartbreaking character love development..

I am literally in tears over this. I was so beautifully written, and pulled at your emotions the entire time. I just stayed up until 7am reading it all! It could have gone on for 100 more pages, and I would have loved each page more than the last.

Initially, I was so upset when Eirin said she absolutely would not marry Lord Hawthorn. I couldn’t believe it, but at the same time it seemed to typical her. Her strong attitude it so admirable, but at the same time I found myself pleading with her to just fall into Lord Hawthorn the way he desperately needed her to.

I don’t remember when I last got so attached to a story, and so attached to the characters.

You truly need to be a published author!

I would read every story over and over again!

...how much time Maria and Hawthorn spend wondering why Eirin won’t accept his proposal, and even lecturing her about it. Even if events previous didn’t make it clear what wretched people they were, that obliviousness surely does.

One of the best series I ever read in this site. Thank you for sharing your talent here!

Disgusted that these horrifically flawed abusive people where in any way made out to be good guys.

I love dark romances and non-con stories. I have read HUNDREDS. This is the absolute perfect story. Each character had depth, and you truly see who they are even though this was a short story and not a full length novel. You could easily turn this in to a book and it would be exceptional. I have so many wonderful things to say about this story. If you ever publish it as a novel, please let us know. I would buy it immediately.

THIS COMMENT IS FOR CHAPTERS 1-6. MY HEART WAS POUNDING, COULD NOT PUT THE LAPTOP DOWN. AWESOME STORIES WITH DETAILED CHARACTERS, SCARED ME, MADE ME CRY, AND ALSO FEEL JOY FOR THE ENDING. I READ NONCON. STORIES ALL THE TIME, THIS IS EXCELLENT.

THANK YOU!!

The story (until Eirin gives in to marry her rapist) is fabulous, but the way Eirin's anguish, pain and continued humiliation of months changed to love for her rapist in a matter of 1.5 pages was too forced to give a not so happy ending of a rapist and victim starting a family with pregnancy - it is just out of flow and coerced ending.

Yet to find a story where the women leaves her rapist or kidnapper for good. Its unreal the kind of same endings all these stories are forced to come to, authors need to be create better and powerful endings and readers also need to appreciate such stories. Given Eirin became a wealthy, powerful, authoritative Countess, would have loved to see the ending with her leaving Lord to live her life like her parents the Duke and Countess would have imagined with head held high and managing her estates and helping others. While deciding not to marry, she could've met a nice Duke who would've loved her truly and told her that he sees no blemish in her or her past, since what the Lord did falls to his accountability not hers. They could've married with kids and become talk of the town while this Lord could've lived in misery and guilt ending up killing himself or as an acquaintance who always bore pain his heart for his folly or gotten married to some woman of his liking...whatever, his life ending would be least interesting.

Loved how Eirin's character developed to an impassive, analytical, strong woman in this and last chapter, a good outcome of all the abuse she faced post her father's death. This made the ending even more forced and hurried.

This Lord was utterly hopeless, he is one of the leads I utterly despise even in non-consent stories, reason -

1. He knew Eirin would say yes to marry him because "afterall, what else was there for her? She would never be able to marry anyone else with a title."

2. He thinks he will just say sorry one night to beg her to stay with him post sex and this will make the rape and abuse turn into love and everything sunshine.

3. Hated Maria aswell who Eirin judged well "her loyalties lie with the Lord"

4. Lord tells Maria, "I know, but I'm good for her too. She doesn't realize it yet, but she will." WTF

5. "I didn't understand why you would have turned down my marriage proposal; I have money and estates, a title and the power that goes with it." ROFL!! Brains is what he is missing.

Thank you for the lovely read. I do adore a good historical romance. Fiesty at the beginning with so much intrege to keep me clued to the pages till the end. Great work.

loved it!

Loved the story. But . . . First, the statement of 5 km. The metric system originated in Revolutionary France in 1795. It was adopted in the UK in 1965. The Armed forces did not use it until NATO came along in 1948 when the alliance needed a uniform standard.

Second and even greater flaw was the isolation of both characters. As nobles, both Erin and Lord Hawthorne were creature within an elaborate ecosystem of family, economic and political relationships. Erin alone would have a nanny who would have been with her pretty much 24/7. Additionally, there probably an spinster or widowed aunt or older cousin living in the household to manage it and serve as a hostess for her father the Duke. As soon as her father died, the new Duke would have shown up that is if he was not already learning the ropes and living in the house. Additionally, there would have been men of business, estate managers and secretaries living in the house. The estate managers and secretaries would probably younger sons or otherwise related to the Upper 10,000. Then the are the political relationships. A duke was a major political, social and economic figure, a combination billionaire, senator and society leader whether he wanted to be or not.

Phillip and his scheming daughter would not have come within a country mile of the Duke as a seemingly unknown creature.

Then there is the question of transportation. The Royal Mail and its system of highly developed roads, changing stations and inns. was well established by the 1790's. A noble would have traveled 10 or 15miles and then changed horses at one of the inns. His own horses would be picked up the next day and taken on to London or returned to the estate.when

The old Duke would not have a Partner as Phillip was described. He would have had many partners in

This is a good story, but could be improved by taking account of the legal realities regarding two points:

- it would appear that the story is set prior to 1878. At that time, a woman could not own land in her own name. Any interest in land would either held by trustees either through a marriage settlement or by her father until her marriage and he husband thereafter. The marriage settlement was invented in the 13th century to protect a wife's capital from a wastrel husband, limiting his entitlement to, at most, the income of that capital;

- a female could never become entitled to an entail in the heirs male: a male heir became entitled to the income on birth, but subject to the precise terms of the entail might never become entitled to the capital.

You are an outstanding author. Rarely do I see any stories anywhere nearly as developed in characters, plot twists, visual details etc. Nice plot twists. This is one of my favorite stories. Please continue your excellent work. Thank you for sharing this story with the world!