All Comments on 'Election Day Ch. 02'

I like it but I feel you took a step back. I want to see more but maybe longer chapters and more progression

Lovin this story!

Thank You!

more please

noice

This is an excellent story, interestingly developed and moving well. Please continue and thanks for these well written chapters.

What a letdown! Half of part 2 was a rehash of the first part and in my opinion, was unnecessary. What little was here was great although the story ended when it should have been getting good...

Well it would be great if further instalments were to appear. Hate dangling by a thread when such a good start was made to this yarn.

im confused about the timeline of these two chapters. i feel like this should have been chapter one. id like a clearer understanding of where we are in their story timeline.