All Comments on 'Electra Complex'

Very hot! Now that it's all in the open, Claire and Dad don't have to sneak around. Hope chapter two comes soon.

I am sure no one noticed.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

The sex in the bathroom scene was just like a scene in a porn I saw and was wondering if that scene gave you the idea for the rest of the story?

What do you call the complex where a daughter has the hots for mama?

Made me wish I had a daughter to see if the theory worked. Can't wait for chapter 2. Maybe they can have a family orgu

The epitome of a love story. All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhibited love.

Great writing. I like your style and story lines. This seems pretty set up for another chapter and I can't wait.

love, love, love family incest,, and this was an interesting one,, claire is six feet tall? very unusual.. well written, well paced,,very erotic.

Not spectacular, but fairly entertaining...

BUT then there was the twist at the end, which I hadn’t seen coming, amd suddenly the story took a really interesting turn.

I'd like to see a sequel or companion story, telling the tale of how the wife and her daughter got together. I'm not really in favour of them all fucking each other, but I am intrigued by what might happen next.

This was wonderful!! Step by step the story evolved, & your readers were drawn in.

Really in !!

You are a great writer. Please continue.

But the family 'zinger' at the end just blue my mind !!

Please continue this story; I beg you.

I wish this story would continue.

More please! :)

... I was thinking the son. Oh well. Good story.

I hope there's more, you can't lead us to the cliff edge and leave us dangling . Just one issue in some of your passages you are mixing genders also first and third person context are a bit confused in some passages. But good story loved the concept looking for the next chapter now. Need to see how these four people resolve their lives and to firm up just who they are.

i really love your daddy/daughter stories they're so hot

It's driving me nuts. Is it Amelia, or Sarah?!

I really enjoyed this story of yours. Also, in my opinion, you have a very good, clean English.