All Comments on 'Electrogasm'

Would like a bit more development. the lactation idea is hot; wish this was really achievable.

When you write a story, you need enough relevant material to start.

3 pages here is a very minimum for the first chapter! This means 3 pages of exciting material, not just some useless filling writing!

Usually, I don't bother telling writers about it but your theme is great so let's hope you focus on writing enough of a novel before submitting your continuation!

I liked it. It's a good idea and it is worth development.

Was so short would love it to be longer!

Love love

Promising start of a story, too short, it's a pity. Perhaps something in style of erotic science fiction with electrosex theme.