All Comments on 'Elf Quarantine'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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especially after he moved here from Philadelphia and begin remodeling the place

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especially after he moved here from Philadelphia and BEGAN remodeling the place

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A true gift of a story

Outstanding work! Please keep this couple going for many more stories through the year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved it!

This is such a touching story that mixes the magic of Xmas with the magic of falling in love. It was cute, warm, emotional and silly which made a perfect mix to create a holiday classic. Thank you so much for taking the time and harnessing your incredible imagination to give us this wonderful tale.

Bimike43Bimike43over 3 years ago

Good story. Thank you. Recommend you have someone proof read it for edits. A spellchecker missed several ‘wrong word’ issues

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, ho ho ho! That was a tasty, if a bit messy, holiday treat. The whole cookie was sweet and spicy, with a satisfying crunch, but the last few bites were the best, as I hit that surprise pocket of sweet cream filling. Excuse me while I go and was my face, hands and upper chest. The sweet cream filling seems to have painted me.

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