by RandomSexStories
especially after he moved here from Philadelphia and begin remodeling the place
SHOULD BE:
especially after he moved here from Philadelphia and BEGAN remodeling the place
Outstanding work! Please keep this couple going for many more stories through the year.
This is such a touching story that mixes the magic of Xmas with the magic of falling in love. It was cute, warm, emotional and silly which made a perfect mix to create a holiday classic. Thank you so much for taking the time and harnessing your incredible imagination to give us this wonderful tale.
Good story. Thank you. Recommend you have someone proof read it for edits. A spellchecker missed several ‘wrong word’ issues
Well, ho ho ho! That was a tasty, if a bit messy, holiday treat. The whole cookie was sweet and spicy, with a satisfying crunch, but the last few bites were the best, as I hit that surprise pocket of sweet cream filling. Excuse me while I go and was my face, hands and upper chest. The sweet cream filling seems to have painted me.