All Comments on 'Eliza at the Shrink'

Great start, looking forward to chapter 2.. Only comment is i would have waited for the eventual sex between the two till the next chapter, the seduction was almost too quick.. But great story otherwise..

I couldn't even get past the first paragraph before I just scrolled to the end to type this. I have seen a lot better stories. That reads like a movie script. It doesn't even read like a story at all. Secondly the very first paragraph before the characters start talking is all in present tense format instead of past tense format as a story should be when doing it in third person writing.

I seriously think you should go and read a book of fiction and then re-write this.

helena2525,

that was so great i would love to read more with elizabeth and Diana sessions please continue please.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga.

USA

Initially I thought, what an overdone premise. Then, through the honest dialogue, realistic progression through the therapy session, and the seduction, I realized this is pretty good stuff.

This story of woman-to-woman sexual seduction and sex (and psychological exploration, too) turned me on when much, if not most, lesbian themes do not.

Look forward to reading more from helena. Thanks.

I can see Mom coming into this little escapade.

I would love it.

Kelli

Pls continue this! It was excellent! If u decide to continue, pls email me to let me know...... ajadsc@gmail.com Thanx!