All Comments on 'Elizabeth Ch. 02: Further In'

I said I'm not sure after chapter 1. I'm more sure after this second chapter. You're losing me. There is no seduction, no buildup, really no story. Just Elizabeth having lesbian sex. And while I'm a big fan of lesbian sex, I'm more a fan of the story first, with wicked hot monkey sex thrown in. You're not telling us the why or how of anything, just that Elizabeth isn't getting sex from her husband, so all these other women see that, and have sex with her. The whole Christian thing, for one. I'm not against the seduction of Christian woman, but absolutely nothing written has demonstrated her to showcase Christian traits. I gave a 5 before to wait and see about the next chapter. This time, I wont give a bad rating, as I really hate doing that, but I cant give it a good one either. I'll just not vote and see what you do next.

Jedd

So glad you are continuing the tale! Can't wait to see what Charlotte does to awaken Elizabeth further.

Oh the naughtiness of it all. Yummmm.