All Comments on 'Elizabeth Ch. 04: Betrayal'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Oh no she didn't! Someone's got some splaining to do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Much better

Now, you have a story! Great twist. And, she has a double betrayal, as Darcie couldnt have filmed it herself, even if she had a camera pre-positioned. Not and have the shots she did. So someone else was filming, with or without Darcie's knowledge. Probably with, but possibly without. And I think it would have to be someone close, with access to do so. Which leads us back to Elizabeth's daughter or sister. Could have been her husband, but i would think he'd already joined in by now if it were him. Cant wait for the next installment. I'm positive i give a five this time.

Jedd

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