All Comments on 'Eliza's Heart-Shaped Locket'

A wonderfully romantic piece; short yet so much shared about the two “friends” — simply about them together. And somehow no need for more; sure, you could easily continue to explore/develop this relationship, but not necessary. The ending is perfect — a touch of poignancy with a sense that they will be together. Very well written. Hope you continue to share. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This was so soft, sweet, and such a tender read. I really enjoyed it and hope you write more. Thank you!

What a lovely interlude! Please give us more. ❤️❤️❤️

A very good short piece.

This was so tender, so happy/sad. Wonderful piece, please keep them coming.

This was so excellent, so much romantic tension, beautifully done. Can't wait til you favor us again. Well done.

Absolutely incredible! I've never had a story ramp up like that. It's not too long, but the wait till the climax is a welcome agony. Wonderful work.

Please continue!

Hey! Forgive me, I haven't figured out how to reply to individual comments yet, lol. Thank you all so much for your kind words. It really means a lot to me. I'll be sure to write more stories when I have the time :)

Very sexy, entirely erotic. A masterful character study with minimal straightforward physical description. I particularly enjoyed the slow heat-up, and explosive windup! Very well done! Five Stars from me!!

I really really like this story. It’s an old crush turned love story where one just happens to be butch and one femme. Just part of the attraction to the other! Thank you for a beautiful and erotic story.

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