All Comments on 'Ella & Evan - Valentine's Coupons Pt. 03'

Oh this is very sad. Why has Ella not remembered handing the jacet to Ridley?? I hope they can all patch things up and get back to loving each other.

The story is continuing to build up, keeping their sex on hold this chapter was a good idea. Now it appears Shanti doesn't have the book the next culprit as to be Ridley, if she does can she be quite about it hmm. I hope when they do find it that their relationship can return to normal. I do though wonder, what happens when dad arrives at campus, so many ways you can take this from here, I hope you can surprise us all in the upcoming chapters.

Agree with dodgeboy - I like how you're working the plot and character development, many authors in this genre don't do that and it leaves an educated reader feeling empty. 5*