All Comments on 'Ellagance'

Interesting premise,

But then it started.

Her breasts were at least twice the size of her head? Huh?

Dolly Parton?

Then she's got a monster cock of her own. Huh?

Stupid.

One star.

This was a pretty good read. I hope to see more of it. Not bad for a first story.

great story, hope you continue this. maybe more dominant talk?

thx

For those of us that fantasized about Dolly Parton 30 years ago and don't mind monstrous cock, it was a good first story. Would want to read a chapter 2 or another story like it. Loved the Greek Mythology reference.

Great story!

I'd love to see a backstory in which Ella first realizes she's changing, and the process that took her from a shy girl to her current state!

The problem would have been, given the description of her size and the lack of prep, that she would have torn his sphincter muscle to shreds and the pain and massive amount of blood would have required an immediate trip to the ER to prevent him from bleeding to death. A little too much, too soon. Ruined the story.

Prrrretty gooood

Good stuff. Too bad it's your only work

Great story though size seemed too great and unrealistic

Excellent!

@anon: "she would have torn his sphincter muscle to shreds and the pain and massive amount of blood would have required an immediate trip to the ER to prevent him from bleeding to death"

There should be a sequel, in which he falls in lust or love with the really cute nurse in the emergency room who treated his injuries from this particular encounter. Nurses are cute and lovable. My daddy married a nurse. :)