All Comments on 'Elle's Night Out Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fine

You're on the right track. Mental images without the usual gross words so prevalent lately. Important too is how the girl feels put into words. Keep going.

cjbjcjbjalmost 11 years ago
part 2

Looking forward

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