All Comments on 'Elle's Revenge'

by FertileMind69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good, but...

It was good but I sometimes got lost in the "years" and who was who. If Elle is your girl from a marriage that recently split, then what's with the "years" of bad sex between the two of you. I never did figure out who Mona is/was.

Finally, I just gave up and enjoyed the sex. The sex parts went well.

Think through the story line a bit better so it hangs together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Your mind seems a bit to fertile, full of shit?

The writing is confusing at best and disorganized to beat the band. As others have pointed out timelines do matter. Exs, girlfriends, housemates? GEt a grip and get real.

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Just

A standard suck and fuck.

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