by FertileMind69
It was good but I sometimes got lost in the "years" and who was who. If Elle is your girl from a marriage that recently split, then what's with the "years" of bad sex between the two of you. I never did figure out who Mona is/was.
Finally, I just gave up and enjoyed the sex. The sex parts went well.
Think through the story line a bit better so it hangs together.
The writing is confusing at best and disorganized to beat the band. As others have pointed out timelines do matter. Exs, girlfriends, housemates? GEt a grip and get real.