All Comments on 'Elliot: Courted Pt. 02'

Love this story

I'm a bit disappointed in the direction of this "relationship". He sniffs and keep Elliot's sweaty underwear but doesn't like the smells of sex?? Doesn't seem likely. If he starts feminizing Elliot I'm out.

Well, I've got to tell you, I'm feeling a little deflated myself right now. I'm disappointed, not in the story, but in Justin. I get the Dom/sub, older/younger thing and I like that part of this. What disappoints me is Justin treating Elliot like a whore afterward. "I got you an Uber", then refusing the kiss along with that whole "you smell lie cum" remark. The only thing missing is "your money's on the dresser". MLF

Hope you write more soon, thank you.

I agree with Anon from January. What a disappointment Justin turned out to be. Also not down with how they keep trying to groom and feminize him — let Elliot grow into who he’s meant to be naturally. He’s not saying no because he likes what’s going on, but because he doesn’t know what do. Icky.