All Comments on 'Elliptigirl - A Love Story Pt. 01'

I voted 5 stars & a fave for your first story. Looking forward to further episodes of the Charlotte/Ryan tale.

This was a great story

Excellent pace and character development! Looking forward to your next piece.

Looking forward to next chapter!

Very enjoyable read. I've suffered from the same kind of roommate. Courtesy of his big mouth we almost got arrested, it was close. I moved out, and went back home. The world has more than a few toxic arschloecher of all genders and melanin levels.

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

My kind of story! Nice guy meets curvy smart underappreciated lady and he makes her cum over and over again!

Your story was so good and compelling it made me comment and I never comment. Fantastic! Write more, please. Write always.

I’d have given anything for this to be me. Bravo! You are clearly talented. I hope you write more soon!

I absolutely love the story! Lots of emotion and personality, and it just felt like a genuine story. Nothing complicated or out of the ordinary or too fictional. Thumbs up on my end.

A great story.

What a fun read. Very sexy. Hope we might see a part 2 soon?

Very nice. I want more of the handsome cat though.

Loved it - five stars! Hope you can find the time to write the second chapter!