All Comments on 'Elven Love Slave Ch. 01'

I hope there’s more to come. I like a good story line and fully developed characters.

A good read. Well developed characters detailed sex. Please continue this tale

Thanks for the comments. I have actually written 6 full chapters of this, but I am an editing fiend with pretty particular word choice, so I will have 10 drafts of each before I am satisfied. I have already submitted an edit of Chapter 1 (I did not know how Literotica formatting worked) and, I have now clicked submit on Chapter 2. Thanks again!