All Comments on 'Elysium: Fever'

I'm not normally a fan of gang bangs. I prefer more women in my fantasies. My favorites are threesomes. Two ladies and a man. I have had the good fortune to participate in more than a few. But this was just excellent. And if the age in your bio is correct your story is beyond your years.

Would love to read about Angel and "Diamond" in other contexts. How does he deal with insatiable? I write. I rarely write personal/people. Your writing flows.

One comment? Preposterous.

This story could have been written for me, or by me. I understand your feelings of symmetry perhaps more than ever before. I loved the rawness. It was unapologetic, viciously sexual, filthy in the best possible way, but it never lost its emotional and intellectual roots. This could have been a story about a ravenous slut and a horny young man fulfilling a fantasy. Instead it was much more.

It was about the desires that hide in each of us, the monsters we keep locked up. And Elysium is this playground for who you really are, who you think you might be, who you hope you are, who you fear resides in you.

I can't help but feel there is blood in this story. I can smell corn-syrup and red food coloring a mile away. This is real. This is no category-filling ditty. This is a part of you. You are the men in the mask, the red queen. I can see you in them as you jump POVs. That passion, that hunger is a hideous thing, thick and slimey and unsightly to behold...and I couldn't get enough.

This story wasn't sexy. Sexy is a girl with perfect hair touching herself and making an aroused but beautiful face. This was a woman in a truck-stop bathroom, fingers in herself up to the knuckles, other hand smearing the grime on the mirror while she tries to steady herself while she cums again and again, heedless of her surrounds, of anything except that terrible need.

I can't wait to read the rest of the series.