All Comments on 'Em & Mike Ch. 20: Or Maybe'

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Tame2wildTame2wildabout 2 years ago

Loved the descriptive style and realism projected in this story! Well done Emily!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This was fun extra. Super sweet innocent Mike. It could also work as a first meeting then carry on reading from 1.

Going to miss these.

Txs

emilyagilbertemilyagilbertabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Anonymous sweet innocent Mike!

Aww thanks, it was fun, taking Mike back to the uncertainty at the beginning of our relationship, and surprisingly hard as Mike has developed as a character and become so much more in my head.

I love that idea, using this chapter as a new beginning.

I guess I could re-word the fist few lines of chapter 1, and it could go round and round on an endless loop.

Do you hear those people screaming? Noooooooooo!!!!!!

^_*

EmAG

emilyagilbertemilyagilbertabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hello Tame2wild.

Ohhhhhhhh, interesting user name. Are you too wild to be tamed, or too tame and need wilding?

I had fun with this chapter, and I love that you mentioned the realism. Their little misunderstanding and squabble in the middle, then make up (almost) sex.

Please keep reading ^_^

EmAG

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I’m so shocked……….meh no I’m not, it was brilliant. I LOVE your writing style, the occasional commentary to the reader is a great touch. Making that connection fleshes out the writing, which makes the characters relatable. I really really hope that you decide to continue writing, new or existing characters any and all welcome, has anyone said no yet? Begged for respite from Em & Mike (or Mike & Em)? Can’t say that I’ve noticed 😉 Can’t thank you enough for the very entertaining entertainment 😇

Tess (uk)

emilyagilbertemilyagilbertabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hi Tess,

Thanks as always for your comments. I'm glad you have had fun.

Next BDSM Manor about to be submitted, hopefully you will enjoy.

Who doesn't love a wedding? EVERYONE'S INVITED.

But fair warning, it does deteriorate into a bit of an orgy!

All the best, EmAG

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

oh Mistress, you have developed this story so so so lovely, I feel really melancholic that it's come to a close... will you let BDSM Manor evolve into something, it sounded somewhat open ended to me...

Your mind creates such beautiful worlds, your concept of respect within bdsm is something I relate to very eagerly!

in great admiration of your style,

a horny reader

emilyagilbertemilyagilbertover 1 year agoAuthor

Hi Horny Reader,

Awww I'm glad that you enjoyed their story. But yes, if you click on the author's name on any of these stories you will be taken to a list if all their stuff.

If you click on my name you will see that there is a whole BDSM Manor series, with characters I am, quite frankly, head over heals with and lots of crazy adventures.

The manor stories are quite m/m focused to a large extent but as long as you don't have an issue with that you should have fun.

There's a few other things around and about as well.

Thanks for commenting, EmAG

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