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Unknownuser1902Unknownuser1902about 3 years ago

Love how it is going, can't wait for more!

warelliswarellisabout 3 years ago

Been liking ths corruption and such in this story~. Definitely good stuff!

Hmm since this seems to be a D&D setting, and judging from Iriel's occasional mentions of "pagan" practices, are Azora & Maloth like heads of some sort of pantheon or are they more like monotheistic deities and such? 😁

I do enjoy how Azora's worship appears to be multi-racial, not just confined to one race.

sinfulwolfsinfulwolfalmost 3 years ago

Deeper and deeper. Seems some are not as pure as they like to think they are. I'm loving every piece of this.

Small criticism, you used Prim's name a few points when it should have been Lei's. Only twice I believe.

Otherwise, just beautiful. Depraved, and delicious. Love your style.

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