All Comments on 'Embrace of the Sea'

Not a bad story. Neat and refreshing to say the least. Good work.

I don't know why, guess it's my cross to bear, but I find it hard to read over the little errors. Deana kept being Dean (did it start as a gay story?) and there are a few misspelled words and a few spots where a word was changed but the old word left in as well.

It's a sexy, sweet story, just the right length... I gave it five stars even though I usually dock a star for having too many errors that a good editor would have caught.

Your concept is interesting. If you find yourself an editor, this could be the start of something very good indeed.