All Comments on 'Embracing The BBW Pt. 01'

by Espresso801

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bimmusa02138bimmusa02138over 4 years ago
Good start but................

Good start to what could be a hot series, but please find an editor.

A few grammatical errors otherwise 4 stars and a great beginning.

waiukmanwaiukmanover 4 years ago
A very sexy story, but.....

Where's the rest???

Please finish it, we all want to know more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Agree with bimmusa02138 and story could use a spell check but keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It was ok

This story was good,but could have been better,if the story teller checked his spelling,and used more imagination,I mean my long thick cock didn't even get hard for goodness sake. The fact that the woman he fucked had big Hooters,was about the only good thing about the story. A great sex story should have the readers horny and ready to cumm in minutes. Try that next time you write a sex story

StrattonChambersStrattonChambersover 3 years ago

I had a girl much like this once, except for the hairy part. Nice memories.

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