All Comments on 'Embracing the Unseen Ch. 01'

We don't want a romance novel, get a grip.

Love the pace and historical setting. Your descriptive style is wonderful.

Great start and pace. Looking forward to part 2

Really like the story and the tenderness of the characters

Great start, beautifully written, can’t wait for part 2

So rich, so intimate, and so beautifully written. Ignore the Neanderthal sp99...,

and please keep fleshing out this story.

Following, favoriting, diving into your other works in the meantime. 5 stars, of course.

can't wait for more

Bro pls give us the update

Good romance/incest story. After 54 stories though, I would like to make a few enlightening comments, and they're all at the beginning. At the tender age of 16 he joined his father in the crucible of World War I (1914-1918). As he faced the trials of battle, the soldier’s heart ached for his mother, a merely 30 years old. That means she had her son at the age of 14. When he came home from heeding the call of duty and joining his father in the war, his dad must have unambiguously been killed or MIA, because there is no mention of him again in the story. When the son came home the war his mom still calls herself, "Your old mother," and she's only 34. That made me laugh, but everything was pretty cool from there. I look forward to the next chapter hoping that “Son fucks mother,” without having to wait for the following chapter for them to finally fuck like rabbits. Hint

I cant wait for the next chapter. you have done to well.

Not much to this no incest just a kiss you need to add to this story and have them having sex and she gets pregnant she's sure young enough !! Only 3 stars NO SEX

Not much to it just a mother and son playfully enjoying each other no incest just a 3

Liked this story but there was no incest 4 stars