All Comments on 'Emerald Eyes'

David is an honorable, sensitive, intelligent man. Does Jill understand how lucky she is? I loved this and hope you continue the storyline.

I love the way you fleshed out the characters and their underlying thoughts and desires

Great story, up there with the best of its type. Thank you it did what i wanted, got me so aroused, my orgasm came easily. The characters are worth bringing back to life for a future story or two, everything about them makes it irresponsible to let them fade away.