All Comments on 'Emily Ch. 01'

Really enjoyed your story telling, can’t wait for more ....

Story needs work. Why doesn't girlfriend have a name? Not believable. Also Emily says she only has a few minutes and then she has all afternoon. She got sauce on her outfit before clocking in? Again not believable.

look forward to more emily's !!!

Oh to hell with these anonymous comments. If they don’t have guts to show their name then their comment is void! Even someone has not posted, I hold no value to their opinion, So yeah, there a few small issues but nothing to ruin a good sex story. Waiting for part 2...........

Greatly anticipating a chapter 2 :)

Great story! Looking forward to more...

Looking forward to more. This was wonderful.

While details matter, so does just telling the story and keeping people's attention. Great job on that front. Loved it.

There I was with my 8 inch cock... get real.

Great story, great fantasy. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

Waiting for my breathing to return to normal.

Fun story...I think the most fun was that his girlfriend was in on it...otherwise it would have been simply another disappointing "cheat on the girlfriend" story ;)

Hot and kinky

Clever premise.

Sex awfully rushed. Needed much more ein the way of preliminaries/foreplay.

Did Emily's tits really have to be E-cups? And 34 is the size of the CHEST. It as nothing to do with the size of the TITS.

You wrote ALLUSION when you meaant ILLUSION

Did his cock really have to be overly big? 8" LONG and 4" AROUND?

Needed dialog about her tits while they were involved. Did he like them? Did he fantasize about them? Did he think about them while he was masturbating? How often?

Had great potetial. Didn't deliver.

Three stars.