by Doctor O
I like the prose style, easy to follow, great character development & puts the reader in the Victorian era. Quite predictable so far, as is true of 99% of literotica stories. I assume this is the 1st of a multi-chaptered story?
I can hardly wait til the Dr. slowly "cures" her bad case of lackanookie!
I got lost in the story. I loved feeling like I was there. Please write more.
Well Dr O, what will be the results of Emily's examination?
What might be some possible treatments? HHMMMMMM? HOT too!
Surely you cannot leave us frustrated like this...it is not
good for your readers' health! We look forward to more chapters and soon please?
Don't know how accurate it is, what with all the medical historical references. But, it's a good start to what may be a hot story. Do continue.
Loved the first installment but find it awfully cruel to end the story where you did. When will the second installment be posted?
Have to admit it, the way you ended it made sure that I'll be looking for the rest of the story just to find out how successful Victorian doctors are at curing a woman's ailments!
It was likely the diminuitive, but probably pronounced the same.
What a clever story! I loved it, and can't wait for the next installment. You devil, you.
A very engaging,well-written piece. The character development is such that one feels he knows the characters a little, but not so well as to become bored with them, as sometimes happens with literotica. Will we be honored any time soon withthe next installment?