by JamieRB
Thanks, updated version with the remainder of the story just submitted. If you have any feedback I would be grateful.
Great first part to your story. One minor hiccup. On the first page her bra size is 32H and on the second it is 32G. Minor of course but noticeable. Just a head's up. Can't wait for te rest.
Liked the buildup of sexual tension and her anticipation of being the object of their sexual desire!