All Comments on 'Emily's Submission'

Feel free to leave any comments, and I would love it if you gave me a 5 star rating if you enjoyed reading. I'm a new writer, so any love would be appreciated!

Incredible story, great way to start a good edging session

Awesome story. Patiently waiting for part 2,3,4,5 and so on.

WTF is the deal with face slapping?? It’s entirely the wrong type of pain to be erotic, it’s very definitely ouch! pain and not Mmmmmm pain.

Using duck tape as a restraint is a dick move, doesn’t exactly gel with the concept of an experienced Dom.

More please!

Love your writing, but the part with the smacking her from behind while she’s reading her paper riddled with mistakes is pulled straight from “Secretary” with Maggie Gyllenhaal. I’m not complaining, as it’s a very sexy scene, just wondering if you’re borrowing ^-^

Why do all these authors always add ass stuff though? Like literotica needs a way to filter out things you don't want. Not sexy

quite sublime so resistance needed no breaking she was ready to submit sexdoll

quite mild

the slut paper on her back was the only spicy thing in the complete chapter

i m a sheer fan of your story home from work so this chapter was a lil low on my expectations