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All Comments on 'Emily's Sweater - Full Version'

by WyltEmrys

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Mac_101Mac_101over 1 year ago

This is a teaser for a much longer story, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Some misplaced single and double quotes make this surprisingly difficult to parse in one pass. You still have to worry about editing in a 750 submission.

Probus888Probus888over 1 year ago

Really good short - leaves you wanting to know what happens next.

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Long-time reader, recently turned author. Available for editing as well, if anyone needs assistance with their own stories. I can be found here & there on the 'Net, usually under this profile name, so if we cross paths, say "Hi!"