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From that point on, the vibrator kept on going off periodically with the same effect. Finally evening came and the old man unlocked me. I tore off the G-string and pulled out the vibrator. It was a white bullet shaped one. I tried to hand it to the old guy, but he did not want to touch it.
He said, "You must have brought it with you. You take it with you." I indicated I didn't want it. So he suggested that I can leave it in the locker where rest of my stuff was, just in case I returned. Since I could care less at that time, I began arguing with him about what happened in the night. He kept repeating that the store front door was closed all weekend and he slept in back room of the store.
As I was getting ready to leave, he offered me some compensation, "Look since you said you had some trouble, I am willing to give you a coupon for a free weekend rental for next time."
I countered, rather brazenly "Along with the original pair of handcuffs you had me put on while shopping, and its key?" He thought it over for a moment but agreed. We went back to the counter, I grabbed the cuffs and he gave me a key to them. This one I realized was different from the one for the full body chains. He also took out a nice silver bracelet. It consisted of a small chain except where there should have been a charm there hung another key. This key appeared identical to the one, for the entire body chains I had spent the weekend in. I asked "what's this?" He indicated, that's my coupon for next time. However, after the events of this weekend, I wasn't sure I was going to come back ever again.
I drove home pretty late. The next morning I had double shift at the bank. I was also filling in for our financial adviser who usually managed new accounts. I woke up early, put on my best business suit with a pink shirt and black jacket and skirt. Later as I was working at the branch, I was helping one of our customers. I got up to grab some papers from the printer. As I straightened my skirt, the lady asked, "Emily that's a nice bracelet, what charm do you have hanging from it?"
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Note - Emily hasn't come to terms with her discovery. Without giving too much out, let's just say, she's not submissive but Type A person.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoI was so hoping that your first language is not English, but I see you mentioned British English vs. American. Maybe I'm wrong in thinking you're from an English-speaking background yet write this way, as though the most basic English is a second (or third) language for you? Dear God! There is no hope for literacy.
To whoever mentioned "He inserted his penis into my vagina" - some people can get away with some poor grammar and still write a hot story. That? Really and truly, is that what you consider sexy? I just inserted my dinner into my microwave and I think that may have turned me on more than did this story. But maybe the robotic sex is suitable, since "Emily" seems to have no feelings at all, no matter what's being done to her.
"Since I could care less at that time" Wrong! That means that you DO care. The proper way to say this is, "I couldn't care less." Get it? Please STOP writing. Now!Start Googling for instruction in basic punctuation and sentence structure. When you feel you've learned at least where to put a period, try again. If you had an editor, he or she probably gave up in tears of frustration.
Anonymousover 6 years ago"Eventually he inserted his penis in my vagina"
Jesus. Well, that certainly aroused me. I think that sentence sums up everything that is wrong with this story and with your writing. Are you putting us on? I see you've written non-fiction before. I assume they must be instructive manuals - "Fit Tab A into Slot B." That's how this story reads, even discarding all the grammatical and other errors. BTW, you shouldn't need an editor to tell you not to capitalize random words, not if you've completed at least an elementary school education.
Anonymousover 6 years ago"I'll be honest with you. I had engaged one of the Free Volunteer Editors. What you see is as a result of the same. I do not wish to name to editor but I can if you care to PM. Now as to Typos, I assume you do know the distinction of spellings for British English vs American English."
Even in your rebuttals, you make the same mistakes. "Free Volunteer Editors" - those words should not be capitalized. "Typos" is not a proper name or title - no capital letter, and you should know this even without an editor. These have nothing to do with English vs. American English. These are goofs made by someone for whom the simple rules of writing are a mystery. Really, these are rules I had learned by fourth grade. If you had an editor, you need to find one who does know basic English (since it seems you do not) because the one you employed does not.
weekend_writerover 6 years agoAuthorI'll be honest with you. I had engaged one of the Free Volunteer Editors. What you see is as a result of the same. I do not wish to name to editor but I can if you care to PM. Now as to Typos, I assume you do know the distinction of spellings for British English vs American English.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe constant repeat of words within the same paragraph is tedious and annoying. You'd do well to seek an editor. Lit offers them for free.
