All Comments on 'Emma: A Bully for Her Thoughts'

What is with theses stupid bully stories? Grow a pair of balls and take a baseball bat to the fucker.

This is dumb! They don't make knives, or set up ambushes or Fucking hit the Bully with a car in this world? I'm not a big guy, but I fucked some up.

Dear lord, I feel dumber for reading this even jumping the stupid part in the middle. Remember, God may have made man but Mr. Cold made men (and women) equal.

It had a great premise but you rushed the shit out of it. Could have been a cool series or something.

crap ending

Some of these dumbass comments need to learn to read the tags. I do agree that the ending was rushed, and the overall narration took you out of it. Overall premise was good and the bones of the story was enjoyable

The story was slow till it suddenly ended. The bf was forgotten half way threw. Her being a virgin was a random detail. What purpos did mandy have to the story. Naration felt all over the place. Would not shut the fuck up about some things. This could have been ⅓ the size

Oh My! I love this story. The style of writing is fantastic. I love how the author talks to me throughout the story and reminds me about everyone's place. But more so I love and understand Emma and how her hatred for Brad is coupled with her desire for him and how she slowly turns from hating him to loving his control over her. While nothing quite so drastic has happened to me, I know firsthand what it is like to both dislike a guy and at the same time fantasize about him. Like other commenters, I would like to have seen more of Tom toward the end of the story. I'm sure he was devastated losing Emma to Brad and I am guessing that Brad ended up telling Tom he was fucking his girlfriend. Oh, I would have liked to see the sweet pain in that conversation. But the author has chosen not to share the rest of Tom's story with us and that is his/her option. I'll respect that. I'm off to read the other story by Smalltoangal now and will follow this author for more stories to come. Perhaps I will even change the style of my next Literotica story to be more like this!

Yeah I have to agree with the other commenters. It would have been nice if you would have included Tom as the unsuspecting cuckold after Emma's first time with Brad. Maybe letting him clean out Emma's pussy after Brad was done with her. Tom just kind of disappears from the story. How about an ending where Tom still loved Emma and married her but let her continue with Brad bc he knew he could never satisfy her the way Brad did. The sad cuckhold who always got sloppy seconds but could just not let her go