All Comments on 'Emma and Her Neighbor Pt. 02'

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

Super bowl one day after a school/work day? Okay.

It's called Super Bowl Sunday for a reason.

falcon69wl over 5 years ago

Welcome Back

Glad you came back for another chapter to this story...I like your writing and topics... While you might need a little help with the editing ie the Superbowl Sunday thing, I really like everything else... hot stories, can't wait to see what else you might write...

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Ah it's so good!!

Fantastic reads, both of them. Your attention to detail is terrific, great visuals, great plot, great action. Bravo!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

YES... brilliant...keep it going

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