All Comments on 'Emma's Domination'

could use some work still felt the shift from friendly to rapist was a bit abrupt.

liked it but...what a flip of the switch...the title makes it sound that he takes over her...which yes he does with his rape of her...but the title makes it more of she is locked away or control from clothes to food.

Was this suppose to continue???

Yet another sick rape story

Wounding people and threatening to kill them is NOT erotic

Move along please

If you're going to make it about the violence rather than the non-con sex, take your shit to Fetish where it belongs.

This is a continuing story meant for non consent/non human and the lead's love is not in this chapter - just to reassure some of you.

do not throw out negative non constructive comments!

They are not helpful to anyone esp the author.

Oh and its noncon=rape read a different catogory. There are not all hearts and flowers w/HEA! Get over yourselves.

To the author it was a quick switch on the lead but I'm sure you have a reason for that. Looking forward to your next installment.

Have her rush to the hospital for a DNA Test. Then she finds a Good Lawyer. Next she files a criminal suit against peter and a multi-million dollar suit against the company he works for.

Only then does she live "happily ever after!"