by kinkbugs
I love this series. As a sub it is my most fervant fantasy come to life. However, the dry anal sex is such a turn off. I appreciate the pain, but it wouldn't be fun for the husband. I would suggest that there is an operation that slaves undergo so that their asses generate lube in the same way as their pussy. Much more fun for master. Ps. The idea of a cream that would let me D break in my ass over and over again is exquisite.
You're doing a good job making this story do what you want it to do, but for my personal taste there's a bit too much raw cruelty in it for it to be genuinely erotic--and I speak as a fan and writer of slave and non-con stories. I got a bit tired of the women's assholes being tortured over and over. (And the term "shithole" is a bit of a turnoff too.) I'm having more fun with your other stories. (Still, I read all three parts of this one, so I guess I couldn't have been all that seriously grossed out.)
Fantastic story. I would love to see this develop further. Looking forward!!