All Comments on 'Emma's Submission'

Well written story, Defo one of my favourites!

Have you read my mind naughty trainer this is what I dream about xxxx

i really liked this story. Very good with details

I can understand ignoring decent English when you're talking as friends with someone or in a forum setting. But any form of published literature shouldn't have more than a couple run-on sentences. You managed to compose well beyond a paragraph's worth in one single sentence numerous times.

The content itself isn't bad, but for the sake of anyone taking erotic literature seriously, please try to educate yourself on actual sentence structure.