All Comments on 'Emmeline's Desires Pt. 04'

For a second night and second time to use a cane on someone inexperienced with it abilities tells me that he is probably a bit sadistic. If he explained that his favorite was the cane but will work up to it or because of her inexperience though he usually uses the cane he will start of with a larger or heavier paddle.

otherwise this chapter is not riddled with the errors of your past chapters. I was able to read it without stopping to reread or figure out what was happening. Much more enjoyable.

Overall liked the chapter and especially the interaction. I enjoy learning about characters outside of any scene/play/punishment.

Do agree with Annon Ok that the cane seemed an advanced place to start given the totality of the situation. If he is starting with the cabe on a new (to him at least) sub's first infraction, well, where does he go when things are farther along and/or more serious?

A daddy not a Dom..interesting turn of events!

I've enjoyed the story thus far, but i was concerned at the use of the cane along with the previous two commenters. It makes me wonder if the seemingly caring side to Carson is a mask for a darker sadistic man hiding behind the facade.

I suppose i shall have to wait and read the next chapter before deciding wether this story continues to draw me in.

I do like the background information and the ability you have to make me, the reader, feel like i know the characters, so a strong 4 stars.

i really like this story and hope there's more to come!

Please continue!

Yet another good story left unfinished. Why do I even bother?

Regardless, thanks. for the good read.

Ooh! I'm left all hot and bothered now. More, more, more!

Please continue Emma's story.

I can’t believe I only stumbled upon this story now, but every chapter is amazing! I love how you weave the angst with the romantic and sexual aspect. Definitely leaning 100% towards Carson and his full acceptance of Emma - hope to see more!