All Comments on 'Empty Nest Ch. 06'

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

OK, let's see where this story is going. Going to be interesting how Ben explains a pregnant mother to his girlfriend.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Wish I could say I didn't see that coming. For the love of God don't completely fuck this story up. Was going so well

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 3 years ago

Still a really good story, although I'm wondering how Ben will explain his mother's pregnancy to Kayla, or maybe she's a very liberal thinker!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bare skinning mom

You can't get a pregnant mom pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Oh No!

So want to see the relationship with Mom continue and further blossom. Calling her by her first name and doing a commitment ceremony, complete with ring.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Don't

Please don't ruin this, I have really been enjoying This story. I look forward to each part but you can't leave mom alone with a new baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It’s the writer’s story folks

Let’s not assume that adding Kayla to the mix will destroy the story - hell, Ben just might already be a father twice?

Anonymous3000Anonymous3000over 3 years ago
That person Kayla

I do not like, I repeat DO NOT like reading chapter stories. They always end up messing up the whole story, most of all always adding another character that is the same gender to the person of the story.

I gave this story a try, it brought tears to my eyes of some parts.

Please don't bring in this girl, you already saying how much his mother miss him and everything. Knowing how much she is going through, being alone while he is in college.

Out of all the times he had been talking to his mother over the phone, never mentioned that girl or texting. Now coming out if nowhere you are going to add a GIRL to the story. On top of that, ASKING HIS MOTHER TO BUY A TICKET FOR KAYLA (THAT HIS MOTHER NEVER HEARD ABOUT).

With the information about Ben being the father of her baby, hiding that he is the father. Pretending that she went to a sperm place to get pregnant or whatever.

I am saying this for everyone that agrees with me PLEASE DO NOT MESS THIS NEXT CHAPER UP WITH THAT HURTFUL INFORMATION.

Anonymous3000Anonymous3000over 3 years ago

I do not like, I repeat DO NOT like reading chapter stories. They always end up messing up the whole story, most of all always adding another character that is the same gender to the person of the story.

I gave this story a try, it brought tears to my eyes of some parts.

Please don't bring in this girl, you already saying how much his mother miss him and everything. Knowing how much she is going through, being alone while he is in college.

Out of all the times he had been talking to his mother over the phone, never mentioned that girl or texting. Now coming out if nowhere you are going to add a GIRL to the story. On top of that, ASKING HIS MOTHER TO BUY A TICKET FOR KAYLA (THAT HIS MOTHER NEVER HEARD ABOUT).

With the information about Ben being the father of her baby, hiding that he is the father. Pretending that she went to a sperm place to get pregnant or whatever.

I am saying this for everyone that agrees with me PLEASE DO NOT MESS THIS NEXT CHAPER UP WITH THAT HURTFUL INFORMATION.

Another thing ( just my opinion) could you add on about him getting into his mother for the first time. Like in the past chapter, how she came home from work early and gave him a blowjob..

It is WAY PAST MY BEDTIME 3:45 AM.

(HAPPING TO GO BE AT WORK BY 9:30)

Me staying up reading all the chapters to know what this story is about.

Please don't mess up my night with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Don’t listen to the comments

Follow the story you had envisioned. This is such a great read so far. Finally a story with some substance. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Aye dont like page 2, that was overdid it. Overall it was good eh. More weight gain and sex would be nice eh, if you would write ch 7. Nice job.

FirmcontrolFirmcontrolover 3 years ago
Great series

A very good series. Really enjoy her weight gain and expanding size. Hopefully, there is no weight loss after the baby is born!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Still very nice but I think their end is coming?????????????? 5 stars!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well who didn't see that coming? *looks around* Yep, that's what I thought. Now the only question is will they be a throuple or will he see sense and get with his mom? She needs to tell him how she really feels.

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