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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
uhhhh

Why would you end the story like that

calx86calx86almost 13 years agoAuthor
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Don't worry, it's not the end. I plan on writing part 2 pretty soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
thank god

for a moment I was worried that you were going to be one of those writers here who start something really good and then never come back to it. Very interesting story can't wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
When

When r u going to continue I would like to read more

calx86calx86almost 13 years agoAuthor
Continuation

Sorry I haven't been on here in a while, work has been taking all of my time. I am hoping to continue really soon.

acfMuseacfMusealmost 13 years ago
Liked most of it...

But that break point at the end...seems like a majorly abrupt shift in tone and story speed.

It'd be cool to see more--just be sure and keep your pace!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
soooo yeah

part two.....soon? Plz? It's been a few months.

thenagashthenagashover 10 years ago

This was pretty hot until that "eventual death" bit. need moar,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It would be soo cool if there were a second chapter where she had to go to work with the possesed clothes still on

That would be great

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Oneoiece

The clothes can more efficient, if fore example onepiece swimming dress, leotard, onpiece bodies going up too. The onepiece clothes have very good advantage: they stucked the full body and they can control in the same time the breats and help panties too. They are unremovable..Maximum pleasure :)

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Hi, my name is Alex Norcross and I am novice fiction writer who mainly focuses on erotic short stories. Through my online existence some have gotten to know me for my still ongoing story "Enchanted Panties". The banner artwork on this page is actually related to my Enchanted P...

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