All Comments on 'End of Innocence Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!!

This section definitely gave me a chill. This is not your typical brother-sister read. Really good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Intense!

Well written. Looking forward to future chapters.

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
Emotion

the emotions this brought out is just wow.

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Just a little note, the story that I am creating, The End of Innocence, has 18 chapters. I started working on it under another name, Sacred Love. The original draft was completed several years ago but did not totally comply to Literotica's standards. The rewrite fixed all t...

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