All Comments on 'End of Innocence Ch. 08'

Good story (I think). There are some that might not like this tragic story, but I definitely do. You go through the whole range of emotions and still manage to keep the story line together. I love your characters as you have fleshed them out and made them interesting. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

The level of emotion in this story is nearly unparalleled. Is this based on actual events or something wow.