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OceandiverOceandiverover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for your kind words and constructive feedback. I intend to do a rewrite based on all the information that you readers were so kind to give me. It will be moving from a novella (currently, 140 book pages to a full-length novel and professionally edited!). Not to fret though, there is still 6 more sections to come - the last is Chapter 17.

Again, Thank you!

WRD

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
Awesome

I think the reason why more people dont read this is because of your style or narration and writing. Its intense and i for one love it. Keep it up.

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Just a little note, the story that I am creating, The End of Innocence, has 18 chapters. I started working on it under another name, Sacred Love. The original draft was completed several years ago but did not totally comply to Literotica's standards. The rewrite fixed all t...

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